Comments for Relating Creatively http://deltondearmas.com relating to others in a creative way Mon, 18 Apr 2011 22:41:35 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ Comment on going up by Elisa's Spot http://deltondearmas.com/2011/04/17/going-up/#comment-114 Mon, 18 Apr 2011 22:41:35 +0000 http://deltondearmas.wordpress.com/?p=259#comment-114 I like that next right thing action!

]]> Comment on going up by Jingle http://deltondearmas.com/2011/04/17/going-up/#comment-113 Mon, 18 Apr 2011 15:41:18 +0000 http://deltondearmas.wordpress.com/?p=259#comment-113 very well penned.

Invite you to share your poetry with our poetry potluck today,
Random poems, poems unrelated to our theme are welcome!

Hope to see you in.
Bless your talent.
Cheers.
xxx
visit me …

]]> Comment on going up by Delton de Armas (@delton70) http://deltondearmas.com/2011/04/17/going-up/#comment-112 Mon, 18 Apr 2011 14:01:11 +0000 http://deltondearmas.wordpress.com/?p=259#comment-112 Thanks for the feedback, Dustus. Your comments are both encouraging and constructive. I appreciate that from you…

]]> Comment on going up by dustus http://deltondearmas.com/2011/04/17/going-up/#comment-111 Mon, 18 Apr 2011 12:29:54 +0000 http://deltondearmas.wordpress.com/?p=259#comment-111 Get the sense of an arduous, worthwhile struggle from your lines. Great step-like action verbs you use in progressions. Keeps the poem moving through present tense and fits the prompt extremely well.

]]> Comment on lenses by wolfsrosebud http://deltondearmas.com/2011/04/03/lenses/#comment-110 Mon, 04 Apr 2011 12:15:51 +0000 http://deltondearmas.wordpress.com/?p=251#comment-110 What great expression in this piece… and understanding.

]]> Comment on lenses by RepressedSoul http://deltondearmas.com/2011/04/03/lenses/#comment-109 Mon, 04 Apr 2011 11:47:38 +0000 http://deltondearmas.wordpress.com/?p=251#comment-109 2D photography and any moment captured through the lense is so poignant. I constantly look through my grandparents old sapia photographs. I think the beauty is that they leave so much to the imagination

]]> Comment on lenses by Mike Patrick http://deltondearmas.com/2011/04/03/lenses/#comment-108 Sun, 03 Apr 2011 21:59:21 +0000 http://deltondearmas.wordpress.com/?p=251#comment-108 I firmly believe that we can look exactly the way we want . . . as soon as I can afford Photoshop.

]]> Comment on lenses by Delton de Armas (@delton70) http://deltondearmas.com/2011/04/03/lenses/#comment-107 Sun, 03 Apr 2011 21:00:12 +0000 http://deltondearmas.wordpress.com/?p=251#comment-107 Great suggestion Dustus. Thanks for the feedback.

]]> Comment on lenses by dustus http://deltondearmas.com/2011/04/03/lenses/#comment-106 Sun, 03 Apr 2011 20:56:49 +0000 http://deltondearmas.wordpress.com/?p=251#comment-106 You wrote a very powerful ending, though for me the 3rd stanza hit home. “i wish to embrace all that it might see / a beauty deeper than skin / escaping this life of misery / a delicate grace from within” Wow, a very minor suggestion… drop one of the “a” repetitions above (either one) and that is an excellent 4 line poem that can stand by itself!

]]> Comment on lenses by erbdex http://deltondearmas.com/2011/04/03/lenses/#comment-105 Sun, 03 Apr 2011 20:43:20 +0000 http://deltondearmas.wordpress.com/?p=251#comment-105 Wow. You write so well. Its refreshing. :)

Come over, some time.

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